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February 19, 2008

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The Free and the Brave (Part 2 or 10 or something...)

By Greyhawk

A while back...

After effects of the Toby Keith concert: Wrote this country music song while driving around in my humvee. Maybe later I'll work out the guitar part and record.
Looking back for that link, I was surprised to realize that was written in May of last year. I was in Iraq, the buildup for the surge was ongoing (though almost done) and we were about to launch some key missions. Meanwhile, back in America, Harry Reid was about to announce the whole thing was a failure. Time flies whether you're having fun or not.

Anyhow,

A very rough cut of a song I wrote during my second tour of duty in Iraq, as part of the "surge" operation in the summer of 2007. I had no guitar or recording equipment on hand over there and this had to remain "in my head" for months until I returned home. I believe I've managed to transfer that music of the mind into digital reality without losing any of the original...

But this is still a rough draft - a basic and incomplete cut. Each part was recorded in one take, (including the lead solo which was improvised on the spot) and the result is something that exists only because I wanted to turn an idea into a reality that I could build on. (On the other hand, my time is such that this may be all it ever is...)

FWIW: I first used the phrase "They're making noise, we're making history" a few years ago as a comment to a fellow milblogger who was taking a tremendous amount of crap in his comments section on one of his posts from Iraq. It was my way of saying "don't worry about these REMFs - it's a hell of a lot easier to write from the comfort of their living rooms than it is in a tent. One of your words is worth about a thousand of theirs."
Words to this version below the fold. (Mrs G insists she can't hear the singing. My excuse: the quality changed with each subsequent mix of this song, from original tracks to mixed final to video soundtrack to youtube upload. But my actual response to her complaint: turn it up.)

And if there are any bass players out there who want to throw down a track and send it to me, feel free. (Preferably ogg, but I can work with lower quality stuff, too.)

I may bore you with technical details on the creation of this later, as an update or in the comments if anyone's curious.

The Free and the Brave
Greyhawk

Over in America, home of the free
Land of unlimited opportunity
People in the streets protest whatever they can
While over in Iraq and Afghanistan

The brave, far from home, are standing tall
and toeing the line, so they can have it all
Some try to complicate it but it's simple to me
They're making noise, we're making history

Osama'd like to think that we can't get it done
And some would like to tell you it's time to cut and run
Me I like to finish something once I've begun
And I don't think I'm the only one

Here making history, hearing the noise
of things that divide and things that destroy
Things you'd never ever want to see on your street
Things you might call the price of defeat

So excuse me if I come home a little annoyed
If while I was making history, you were making noise

We're making history
They're making noise
We're facing the fire
They're playing with toys
Nobody ever said
That it would be easy
They're making noise
We're making history

- Iraq, May, 2007

A note on the pictures: Most of these were actually in my head along with the words and music, I began adding the images shortly after the words coalesced. But like my guitar, they too were back home (on my computer hard drive) - except for those I took in Iraq during that tour. Many are from other milbloggers, and I can only remember the sources for a few. So if you see one of yours in the montage let me know, I'll compile a list of credits. (And you have my thanks.)

For my fellow troops still deployed: sorry, I know youtube is blocked and all you see is a big square gap up there. I'll get a version to you through other methods.


Posted by Greyhawk / February 19, 2008 3:44 AM | Permalink

18 Comments

Awesome, GH!!

Mrs G is right though, and I'd like to be able to hear the singing better, too.

Mrs. G is always right.

But I'd like to sing better... and if you heard it better you'd agree.

So, you're welcome. :)

Thanks for sharing the video, interesting lyrics. Glad to see you bloggin' again.

Big G, welcome back...and what a kick ass song! I "saw" Toby through my company's eyes (I stayed behind and sent em off to Camp Vic for the show)...But his music stayed in my head. I can hear him or even Alan Jackson work this real good!
Thanks
DS

What a surprise! An early birthday present. I had trouble hearing al the lyrics also. How about printing them on your blog? Then we could all sing along.

Wow, flashback to your rock star days! You still sound good to me! I do know a pretty good bass player with some extra time on his hands these days. I'll put the bug in his ear. I thought I recognized someone in those quick flashes of pictures, but of course he prefers to fly under the radar so I doubt if he will want his name in the list of credits ;) Love you!

I love it! Can't wait to see a polished/complete version of this. Good stuff!

Good to see you back again! That was awesome - great way to start the week! Thanks :)

You need a better mixing studio. Bug Roger Simon to make that happen.

Hmmmmm. Back with a...vengeance? I caught you in the clips. Keep it up.

I loved it! At least we're making new music. those other folks are just playing re-runs.

Hey, I turned it up....played it over and over, sang along and tapped my boot.

That is until my GrandDaughter Sarah came in and told me I woke up her little sister.

Dang, good stuff...

Thanks

Papa Ray

Glad your back God bless you and your loved ones.

Welcome home Greyhawk, loved the song, and thanks for including the photo of Fiddler's Green LZ that honors my son and his fellow fallen 48th BCT GAARNG;

proud dad SGT Mike Stokely
KIA 16 AUG 05 near Yusufiyah Iraq
E 108 CAV 48th BCT GAARNG

"But I'd like to sing better... and if you heard it better you'd agree."

Sheesh. Your voice is just fine. Just make it a little louder.

Or do we have to beg? ;-)

I'm with MaryAnn, and hey, I'm not shy...

Pretty, pretty, pretty PLEASE?!?

It's great BTW! I had wondered how it sounded in your head -- great poem, better song! :)

Anyway, I did turn it up which definitely helped, but REALLY, we all want our high-end Greyhawk MP3/video (whatever), k?

Welcome home! Thoroughly enjoying the new posts :)

Those are excellent lyrics, and Mrs. G is right.

Thank you sir.

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November 26, 2010


America@war
[Greyhawk]
I think anyone who's ever pondered the "comment" option - once only available on blogs and bulletin boards, now ubiquitous on almost any web site - will appreciate this:
The so-called faculty of writing is not so much a faculty of writing as it is a faculty of thinking. When a man says, "I have an idea but I can't express it"; that man hasn't an idea but merely a vague feeling. If a man has a feeling of that kind, and will sit down for a half an hour and persistently try to put into writing what he feels, the probabilities are at least 90 percent that he will either be able to record it, or else realize that he has no idea at all. In either case, he will do himself a benefit.

That's wisdom from the past, captured for posterity at the US Naval Institute, shared via the web on the institute's 137th anniversary.

From their about page:

The Naval Institute shall remain

INDEPENDENT - A non-profit member association, with no government support, that does not lobby for special interests;

NON-PARTISAN - An independent, professional military association with a mission, goals and objectives that transcend political affiliations; and shall encourage

IDEAS - Through its respected journals Proceedings and Naval History, its conferences, its books and its online content, in support of those who serve.

"The Naval Institute has three core activities," among them, History and Preservation:

The Naval Institute also has recently introduced Americans at War, a living history of Americans at war in their own words and from their own experiences. These 90-second vignettes convey powerful stories of inspiration, pride, and patriotism.

Take a look at the collection, and you'll see it's not limited to accounts from those who served on ships at sea, members of the other branches are well-represented.

I'm fortunate to have met USNI's Mary Ripley, she's responsible for the institute's oral history program (and she's the daughter of the late John Ripley, whose story is told here). She also deserves much credit for their blog. ("We're not the Navy nor any government agency. Blog and comment freely.") We met at a milblog conference - Mary knew (and I would come to realize) that milbloggers are the 21st-century version of exactly what the US Naval Institute is all about. Once that light bulb came on in my head, I mentioned a vague idea for a project to her - milblogs as the 21st century oral history that they are.

"Put that in writing," she said (of course - see first paragraph above!) - and here's part of the result.

Shortly after the first tent was pitched by the American military in Iraq a wire was connected to a computer therein, and the internet was available to a generation of Americans at war - many of whom had grown up online. From that point on, at any given moment, somewhere in Iraq a Soldier, Sailor, Airman or Marine was at a keyboard sharing the events of his or her day with the folks back home. While most would simply fire off an email, others took advantage of the (then) relatively new online blogging platforms to post their thoughts and experiences for the entire world to see. The milblog was born - and from that moment to this stories detailing everything from the most mundane aspects of camp life to intense combat action (often described within hours of the event) have been available on the web...

And et cetera - but since you're reading this on a milblog, you probably knew that. And you know that milblogs aren't just blogs written by troops at war, that many friends, family members, and supporters likewise documented their story of America at war online in near-real time, as those stories developed.

The diversity in membership of that group is broad, the one thing we all have in common is the impulse to make sense of the seemingly senseless, and communicate the tale - for each of us that impulse was strong enough to overcome whatever barriers prevent the vast majority of people from doing the same. Everyone at some point has some vague idea they believe should be shared - we were the people who, from some combination of internal and external urging, found and spent those many half hours persistently trying to write it down.

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But where will all that be in another 137 years? Or five or ten, for that matter. That's something I've asked myself since at least 2004 - when I wrote this:

Closing Blogs is nothing new. So many site's owners just give up on their own. They come and go, you know, these MilBloggers do. Like any other sort of blogger. Many post in the lonely down hours far from home, spill their guts for the world, then abandon their spots when the tour of duty is up. They have lives again somewhere in the world, and no need to share the details. So it goes.

Many are truly gone - no site left at all. "The page cannot be found." Other blogs remain, like abandoned defensive positions in shifting desert sands.

Membership in the ghost battalion has grown in the years since, and an ever growing majority of those abandoned-but-still-standing sites are vanishing. Have you checked out Lt Smash's site lately? How about Sgt Hook's? If you're a long-time milblog reader you know the first widely-read milblog from Operation Iraq Freedom and the first widely-read milblog from Afghanistan are both gone from the web. If you're a relative newcomer to this world you may never even have heard of them - or the dozens upon dozens of others who carried forth the standard they set down.

If you have a vague notion that something should be done about that, (a notion I've heard expressed more than once...) then you and I and the good folks at the US Naval Institute are in agreement. Preserving the history documented by the milbloggers is just one of the goals of the milblog project, the once-vague idea that we're now making real.

And it's a big idea, if I say so myself - too big to explain in one simple blog post, so stand by for more. Likewise, it's too big a task to be accomplished by just one person. So if you're a milblogger (and exactly what is a milblogger? is a topic for much further discussion on its own) I'm asking for your help. All I'll really need is just a little bit (maybe just one or two of those half hours...) of your time, and your willingness to tell the tale.

We've already made history, it's time to save it.

(More to follow...)




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  • Rick NYC: Glad your back God bless you and your loved ones. read more
  • Papa Ray: Hey, I turned it up....played it over and over, sang read more
  • Kat-missouri: I loved it! At least we're making new music. those read more
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The Mudville Gazette is written and produced by Greyhawk, who recently retired from 24 years of active duty in the US military, but will maintain this disclaimer: Unless otherwise credited, the opinions expressed are those of the author, and nothing here is to be taken as representing the official position of or endorsement by the United States Department of Defense or any of its subordinate components.

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Tending Distant
Fires


Far from hearth and home, watching
Cold alone but not alone
On distant shore and only wanting
Safe return and little more

What tales we'll tell
When that time comes
When tales can be told

When things grim
Seem far away
When other fires go cold

Some distant sunset, vision fading
Memories remain
And tired eyes gaze 'pon folded flags
While distant drums beat their refrain

Saluting fallen friends whose names
And youth will never fade
Here's to those on other shores,
for them live well, the price is paid

- Greyhawk,
Baghdad,
December 2004